
Endometriosis V2
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This is a lot nicer design! Im still not convinced on the hearts or venus symbol though. The electric bolt, softer yellow and differential colour paws are great contributions. Maybe have electric bolts on the ears? The constant pain is my biggest issue so to see that more visually represented would be good. The facial expression is exactly how I feel everyday.
I am about to go into hospital and not looking forward to the scars, similar to this little bunn. As surgery is considered the gold standard for diagnosis (as its not always visible on ultrasound and mri) the scars are an essential part of the design.
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I feel the same about the scar, only because thats what im about to get ..
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I agree with those who have mentioned the yellow needs to be less bright and cheery. Perhaps a dull yellow to pale yellow. The feeling of being washed out and tired.
I love all the references to temperature fluctuations. Mine were so severe I once stood outside my classroom door in a snowstorm because I felt so hot and needed to cool down. That is where you could use intense colors, the Plushie deep red, a dark blue or icy blue. I am assuming the green is for an average temperature, why not bring it out to an earthy green.
The look on the face is perfect.
I believe it could use more lightning bolts on the ears though, Endometriosis just causes so much pain, from increased pain during periods, to the pain of being bloated, period like cramps when you are not even having your cycle. The pain it causes in your relationship because you have to turn your partner away when they are interested in something physical, and you cannot engage because you know it will cause you physical pain if you do. -
I love the expression of this design!
I do appreciate the cross through the female symbol rather than the female symbol itself. The colors are a bit bright and fun- I would recommend using a more muted yellow. Yellow is the right color, as that’s the awareness ribbon’s color, but the brightness on the plush doesn’t feel accurate to the experience of the condition. It’s muted and dull, in my opinion.
The color with it should be a dark red, similar to the old plushie’s color pallet, but with a darker red and a more muted yellow. These are all just my suggestions, however.
The hat, the details, everything else looks awesome. I can’t wait to see how the pouch works for heating if you decide to keep that feature. I love my carrot water bottle from the old design.
Edit: Also endo belly would be cool to see on this plush! But I understand if there are limits to adding that sort of shape to the plush
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Another plushy that I absolutely adore and resonate with